Ali, you've done wonders at resuscitating this wonderful library of the mastered art of the langauge. I'm still yet to re-scan one of your previous entries, but I have no doubt that your style has not wavered on ounce by any means. You have indeed an amazing and intelligent grasp, as does anyone else who has posted their works here, of metaphors, construction and flow of thoughts and so forth. In short, I admire the beauty in this latest poem.
You have all done well. It is a shame that no one has ever posted much more, including myself. Please! I implore you all, show me some more wonderful works!
I don't know how true these uttered words may be, but in terms of critiquing poetry I believe (at least from my perspective) that it's difficult balance one's thoughts thoroughly merely if only that in my mind there is no correct or
incorrect way to write it. At the end of the day, it all boils down to one thing: metaphors. Call it what else you like. Intepretations, analogies, a figure of speech woven into a construct, it's all a matter of putting the mind through the fingers and into paper - or a keyboard.
I do plan on working on some writing soon. Hopefully, I'll have something new to show you all. In the meantime, hopefully I can fix that dreaded yellow I used. If not... hmm... I'll have to think of something.
Well done, Ali. I am both proud of you and pleased to see this thread recieve such adoration. Thank you.